Can I get some IBanking Resume Critique?
Got all I wanted thanks everyone
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Looks great to me. Jeez, kids these days... goddamned overachievers.
Although... what the fuck does "Windows" mean as a technical skill? You can also feel free to drop MS Office from that list of skills.
Edit: If I'm not mistaken, the "official" terminology is just plain ole "Bloomberg Terminal". No "Financial" in the middle, and with a capital T.
yeaaah dunno why I put "windows" on there lol. Took off Linux too. Is there too much white space?
Any other comments?
It's fine. At a target school, Gpa is key which you have and the internship/prior experience tells them you're serious about finance.
Summer Analyst? You're a Freshman dude. You're an intern, not a summer analyst. I remember getting dicked on hard because of that, summer analysts are the interns during their Junior summer, who then get offers or get ding donged.
Well its summer and I'm analyzing soooo..... I kid, I kid. Changed it to summer "intern"
For consistency, unbold the "3.8/4.0"
3rd bullet of current internship - I don't like the syntax of "worth between". Also I think general rule of thumb is that if you are going to use the "mm" for millions you keep it lower case (with no space), and if you are just going to use "M" it would be capitalized (again with no space). Might want to specify what program the database is in.
Font size and alignment looks weird in the bottom section. Might want to check that out. Also, I would change "volunteering at Gleaners Food Bank" to "Gleaners Food Bank Volunteer" to maintain the use of all nouns in that section and so you don't have an awkward uncapitalized word. How much revenue is your tutoring business generating? If substantial it all, you could include it.
Finance Club - you have a period at the end of your first bullet that you should delete.
In general - you could get a little more specific with some of your bullet points. If you performed research, I want to know what your deliverable was (memo? presentation? model output?) and what the research was used for/who it was delivered to.
If you had some baller ass ACT score (I would imagine you must have if you are a tutor) I think it would be OK to include in a sophomore resume.
Quality advice guys and all helpful.
Thanks
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