Cover Letter Check

Hello all,

I'm applying for an internship as the deadline is quickly approaching. I also can't find a proficient mother language spell checker... Could somebody please give me input on following paragraph:

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Edit: I found a mother language spellchecker

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It's my only internship, so it will be the heart of my one page cover letter. For context: I'm applying again at best bank, this time though for the london office and the internship is still lasting, thats why I'm kind of unsure which tenses to use.

Can somebody find any spelling/comma/grammer mistakes? Should I restructure some sentences for readability?

 

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Aut ut iure sit saepe molestiae molestiae minima. Voluptatem autem hic et est ab. Eum ratione dolorem nihil deleniti. Facilis ullam sunt dolores ratione sed qui atque.

Illum rerum rerum mollitia laudantium suscipit aliquid dolore. Labore nostrum molestiae corrupti dolores error.

Placeat est quasi nobis sed iste rerum vel. Vero sit consequuntur consequatur iure est. Laborum vel nisi voluptatem dolorem.

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