Cover Letter Review - All comments welcome

All your comments are welcome.

http://www.razume.com/documents/21678

Some thoughts:

I excluded the name of the school where I did the MBA as it is a small non-target school. I think it doesn't add any value. If anything it will force the reading to go through my resume to find what school.

Does anybody care what my interests are (second paragraph)? I thought this paragraph will let the reader know that I've been always interested in the capital markets, and that I started in valuations as a way of somehow move into investment banking.

thanks

 

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