Cover Letter Review - Improvement for my cover letter?
Hi everybody,
I´d like to ask if you can give me input and suggest improvements on
my cover letter. Basically it is for MM Shops and IB which still have open
deadlines.
Thanks.
Hi everybody,
I´d like to ask if you can give me input and suggest improvements on
my cover letter. Basically it is for MM Shops and IB which still have open
deadlines.
Thanks.
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tl;dr
yea too long
I would short this C.L. b/c its waaaay tooo longg. Blah blah blah. Do a search. There are some good posts on this sort of thing. 2 or 3 short and sweet paragraphs.
Thanks for the input. I was wondering if it was too long myself;) Anyway which paragraphs would you shorten or delete?
all paragraphs. dude it should be like 3-4 paragraphs 2-3 sentences each. u have like 5 run on too
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