ER resume advice

I am currently in IT at BB but want to make it into ER.

I would like to hear your comments about my resume(attached). Be honest and Be Brutal :)

P.S. I have not elaborated my IT work because thats useless to the job

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Best Response
  1. Wouldn't put CFA at the very top.
  2. What is SAT Reasoning? Just put down SAT
  3. Why is your SAT Subject test 1600/1600? I could have swore that each individual subject test was 800
  4. Remove border and where is your contact information?
  5. You've been at your FT BB IT position since 2013 and all you have is one bullet point?
  6. Expand your margins to fit in the FT BB IT position
  7. Remove repetitive finance president and being a president isn't an "honor"
  8. There are a million changes to be made... get your shit together
 
  1. The reason I put CFA at the very top is because CFA is relevant to ER but Engineering isnt
  2. SAT Reasoning is SAT 1.
  3. I took two subject tests and got 800/800 in both. I am pretty sure we used to refer to the scores in both of these together
  4. I removed Contact Info in my sample I uploaded but I have it just below the name
  5. I didnt elaborate because that is all IT stuff. Much more useful to talk about other things in my project experience about equity research I think. That was my reasoning but I am not sure what to do here? Any advice would be very helpful.
  6. Ok. Will put in another couple of points
  7. Done

I am uploading an updated resume to take some of the recommended changes into account. Do let me know what else needs reworking.

Thanks a lot for your time.

 

@Imnotwhiteonthestreet

If I remove CFA at the top and president at the bottom, I dont get how that helps?

Having CFA Level 2 Candidate is supposed to be an indicator of interest and the same thing with the club president at school. I don't want to sound desperate but I want to show that I have a genuine interest in finance given I don't have a finance undergrad degree.

 

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