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Company is based in Chicago and deals with Consulting, Restructuring, bankruptcy, etc. My cousin is very respected and successful at this company. He tells me there is an opening and we both agree it is a good idea to jump on the opportunity.

I graduated 1.5 years ago. This would be my first analyst position. I feel like I do not have much related experience, but I am a quick learner and adapt well. My cousin tells me I am more than capable at being successful. I want this position, so please bash the resume as much as you would like.

I need help immediately. Position is time sensitive.

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Comments (13)

  • SECfinance's picture

    Do us (and yourself) a quick favor and make a copy of your resume with identifying characteristics removed.

    MM IB -> Corporate Development

  • OMS's picture

    wow this is a first.

  • bforer2's picture

    Sorry. My resume is honest and I need help. Thanks for that bit though, I appreciate it. Resume Updated

  • bforer2's picture

    I will do that if you think it's best. Current format is what my alumni association provided.

  • yeahright's picture

    That current format sucks. Change it ASAP

    Frank Sinatra - "Alcohol may be man's worst enemy, but the bible says love your enemy."

  • bforer2's picture

    I'll get it done in an hour. Thanks.

  • bforer2's picture

    Ok, I have not completed the resume yet as I have been swamped at work. I have some issues like the question you raised about my GPA.

    I had a medical withdrawal from my first university experience, I left the school with a 1.8 GPA. I was only able to raise it to a 2.95 with a 3.24 major GPA from my graduated university.

    I opened 3 companies while I was in school.
    Importing winter garments from s. america and having products @ Ski/Snowboard Stores on consignment.
    Refinishing and re-tuning Pianos- Worked out of a storage unit
    Club/Bar/Lounge/Festival Entertainment Contracts- DJ's, Live Performers, Security, Dancers, Promotions

    I paved my way financially thought school but never made it big.

    Also means I never had an internship other than College Works Painting my Freshman year of College 7 years ago.

    What would you include on your resume?

    I've never worked in "Groups" or Corporate Projects.

    Basically, I have an "in." I have the skills, but definetly not the corporate experience to prove it.

  • yeahright's picture

    Don't list GPA. If you handled funds in anyway at those positions, list them and specific numbers for experience. Do NOT put CEO, put Founder. Have you done any extracurriculars?

    Frank Sinatra - "Alcohol may be man's worst enemy, but the bible says love your enemy."

  • bforer2's picture

    Yes...

    FREELANCE Halloween Hallway- Expanded 3 seasonal stores into a franchise operation through research/ analytics.
    Simplified Solutions- Revised business plan and market strategy to focus on emerging markets.
    HACE- Created HACE's online social media outlet and delivered a presentation to the BOD.
    ACTIVITIES Treasurer of ALPFA/LABS- Midwest Chapter of the Year, University of Illinois 2011
    Volunteer/Event Coordinator for Executives' Club of Chicago Current
    Executive Board Member of Chicago Organizational Fund and committee review officer 2010
    Director of Community Service for The Management Leadership Association 2010
    President of Lambda Upsilon Lambda Fraternity, Incorporated UIC 2010

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    yeahright's picture

    Frank Sinatra - "Alcohol may be man's worst enemy, but the bible says love your enemy."