Going for a second post-graduate role, what needs to be improved?

Hello everyone,

Currently just past the halfway point of a fixed one-year internship & about to start looking for a different role as I know it can take some time.

Currently working for a relatively large (think multi billion AuM) Alternative Investment Manager with a large number of managed accounts. This is more of a 'base'/template CV, which will be tailored to different applications. Not sure which exact types of roles I'll be going for just yet.

Any advice/suggested improvements will be appreciated.

Thanks!