No holds barred. Rip into my resume and tell me what should be changed. Thanks in advance!
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Or removed entirely. They're all implied and assumed from his experiences.
I was just saying in general that skills and interests should be at the bottom, regardless of what they actually are, but you're are right that in this case it is assumed that he has those skills and he doesn't need to include them and be redundant.
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More substantively, on this bullet:
"Speculated on WTI Crude and USD to assist CFO in mitigating FX risk and facilitating international commodity transactions"
I think the potential recruiter/hiring manager might be put off by the word "speculated." Yes, you assisted the CFO, but maybe you want to write it differently. Can you think of another verb that would work that shows a more positive influence on the project and on the firm?
To me, I would think that researching, trading, investing, or positioning might be something someone would hire you for. Unless you do want to be hired as a speculator, which seems a bit dodgy. But I could be reading it all wrong.
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I would expand more on your most recent experience. Your skills section should probably be removed unless you have some hard skills or certifications, although I get your probably hurting to take up space as those your age dont have much. I also think the Month - Month 2015 looks a little weird I would change it to Month 2015 - Month 2015.
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