Junior at Non-Target - BB SA

Try saving your resume as a PDF and then reupload so that formatting errors don't occur. (also useful when applying for real, since for some reasons word docs, just don't look consistent when you upload)

delete the "profile" section

professional exp before clubs

cut down on bullets for some of the exp's. no more than 4 i would say per exp.

delete the "references available upon request"

add interests

i would also delete periods at end of bullets

rest of resume is kinda hard to read

Great feedback. All other please chime in, need this ready by the AM.

• I would remove the "Profile" section
• Put your work experience before Clubs & Activities
• After you put work experience first (2nd to education), why don't you combine your additional experience with the Clubs & Activities and rename it something like "Activities and Leadership Experience"? Just a thought...
• Add skills and interests at the bottom (you should have some space after deleting the "Profile" section)

EDIT Posted this before I saw the above post. Some overlap but also agree with everything else applelover said.

-Remove the "Profile" Section. The whole point of the resume is to make such descriptions irrelevant

-Round GPA to "3.7/4.0" (But thank you for maintaining sig-figs in the denominator, very few people do this and it drives me crazy)

-No point in saying "Expected Graduation", just write "March 2013 and they'll know what you mean

-The note about references at the bottom is irrelevant, remove it. They know that when they ask you to jum, you'll ask how high; they'll be able to get references out of whether you mention it or not

-Change "Additional Experience" to "Additional Qualifications"