Non Target 3.8 GPA S&T/ IB resume review
My resume rip it apart, kill it, but help it grow please.
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What does "concentration as analyst" even mean? Remove high school GPA and replace with test scores if they're decent and you want a number there. Get rid of the skills section if you're not going to list tangible skills.
Agree with the comments above
Additionally, I'd remove high school altogether unless it is very recognizable/common enough that it will help networking (not just your typical public school like mine - some place that many top school types would have been and will find a connection with, if such a thing exists). I'm not going to go through every typo, but there are some noticeable ones that will make this an automatic reject in my mind (ie Citigroup, guest instead of guests, etc). Formatting wise, the bullets need to line up for each position. And lastly, I would hit up a thesaurus and look at other resumes to spice up the wording on some of your bullets to make it sound more professional and appealing (for example, you used "worked" numerous times - a bit repetitive)
Looks like you're a junior if graduating in May 2016. Not to be discouraging, but you are going to need to bust your ass networking for an internship ASAP to bolster your work experience before graduation
You have some attractive GPA. Get good interns in your Resume and you should be off to a good start. You may also want to review this link
http://www.wallstreetoasis.com/forums/need-some-guidance-for-my-cvresume
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