Hey All,
Please critique my resume. All advice is welcome and appreciated.
Updated on Aug 3-2011
http://www.razume.com/doc/3/f0c0e449-fb3a-4b63-a0…
Thanks.
Note: I kept my high school school because it was a prep school in the north east. Think below Exeter and Andover. I thought it could help.
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I would remove the SAT score.
SAT depends on which firm you apply to (maybe in maybe out), Id make your headers bigger by a little (like experience) and company, (+2 font, +1 font size), key thing is your descriptions, add more result oriented, numbers, etc stuff, be more specific, will make a big diff
So would it be fine to dump the activities together like this...
Activities: Captain of X, Founder of Y, News Editor of Z?
Or would it be better to say
Activities & Leadership: Captain of X, Founder of Y, News Editor of Z, College Tutor, and Lifeguard
I figure with bigger font and experience for this fall I will be fine with filling up the whole page.
Thanks for the quick responses so far! I'll try to post a more updated version later.
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