Please don’t hesitate on destroying this resume. Any thoughts and suggestions will be greatly appreciated. I have 9 years of experience trading equities and would to change paths and work for a hedge fund or IB as an analyst. I have not been getting very much feedback. I am hoping you guys could help. Thanks in advance.
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The comment about formatting that was here earlier was spot on. This is a very awkward and inefficient format. All of your info can be condensed to 1 page.
No offense, but you really need start from scratch.
Is this formatting better
Where did my comment go? It wasn't really spam was it? :s
Sorry had to repost with new formatting
I agree about the overall format...
Also, (1) don't put dates in parentheses, (2) Make sure first word is parallel (you wrote "Ads a team leader"), (3) proof-read, watch your spelling, (4) I don't like the part under skills about the (9) years of trading experience, (5) personal preference - no periods at the end of the bullets
I would change the job description bullets for your current job to present tense. Or are you no longer there?
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