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Hello,
I am currently applying to jobs and would like some advice on how the body of my cover letter looks.

As a trainee at XXXXXX, I have held many responsibilities. These responsibilities have provided me with valuable skills and experiences that I believe I can apply to your company. As part of my responsibilities I am in charge of conducting research on both public and private companies, and within market sectors, specifically the Biotechnology and Technology sector. One the research has been completed I analyze a variety of different metrics, including but not limited to the company’s competitors, revenue stream, cash flow, and earnings multiples. I then work alongside senior partners to develop an investment thesis and investor slide deck, which I then present to the sales team. My experience performing equity research took advantage of my analysis skills, my attention to detail, and my communication skills by causing me to be articulate, detailed and concise.

Does it make sense?
What would you add?

Thanks

 

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