I think it's fine. I guess the only comment I have is maybe try to give a bit more details on certain points. Like: "Responsible for client and potential buyers presentations"

well... anybody can write that

"Prepared over 20 presentations overviewing XYZ for clients and potential buyers. Learnt to do ZYX."

I think if you decrease the page margins (look huge) and add more details you're good. Also why "GPA" at EU uni? Is that what you use in Greece?

Also note: - presentations for potential buyers, or - potential buyers' (note the apostrophe) presentations

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–make the font a serif font (Times) –your margins are greater than 1". make them 0.6-0.8" –all bullet points must go at least three-quarters across the page –bullet points need work. 'Trained mktg team' Trained to do what? How?

Start with that. Feel free to post it again.

 

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