Please Review My Resume - Primarily looking for S&T positions

Please give me some feedback on my resume, I'm primarily looking at S&T positions but also applying to some places as an analyst. It's got me some interviews so far but I'm hoping I can tune it up and make it more effective as I continue my job search. Thanks in advance.

http://www.razume.com/documents/14798

 
  • Education should be at the top
  • Nobody cares about your summary
  • Why are your dates in the middle of the page?
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Mezz:
coffeebateman:
- Education should be at the top
Strongly disagree.

That was my bad, I read his last WE as June 2008 to December 2008 and assumed it was off-cycle internship.

-------------------------------------------------------- "I do not think there is any other quality so essential to success of any kind as the quality of perseverance. It overcom
 
coffeebateman:
- Education should be at the top - Nobody cares about your summary - Why are your dates in the middle of the page?
  1. Get rid of the summary.
  2. Experienced hires have education on the bottom, undergrad has it on the top.
  3. Your resume is poorly formatted.
"Greed, in all of its forms; greed for life, for money, for love, for knowledge has marked the upward surge of mankind. And greed, you mark my words, will not only save Teldar Paper, but that other malfunctioning corporation called the USA."
 
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Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll revise the format. Summary is worthless? I thought it would add more value than having additional work experience that was irrelevant (restaurant) to fill out the page.

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