Resume CRITICISM NEEDED, To SAVE MY LIFE ..will give SB.
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Following advice: 1) No need for a summary experience 2) Try to create some more spacing in the resume by removing above, e.g. between headings, dot-points, increase margins 3) No need for HS experience 4) Technical section not relevant either
Happy to look at next draft
Similar to the above, I can't even really dig into it until I can read it.
Get rid of the summary. Do not replace it with an objective either. They are all terrible.
Fix all of your spacing and alignment. The lines don't match up with the words, the bullets are outside of the lines and aren't indented, etc.
Technical skills section is unnecessary too. Your accomplishments and experiences imply competence with certain tools and skills.
Basic grammar and spelling check is a must. You wrote "TECHNIAL" in all caps, for instance.
Just some thoughts: 1) Remove summary 2) put job titles under company names 3) I think having bullets within the company looks better instead of the bullets lining up with your section header as you have it, but that's just me 4) Since you're in school, why not put your education at the top and jut name it education? 5) I don't believe in putting level 1 candidacy because you didn't accomplish anything, you only paid for the exam which anyone can do. You can mention that you're studying for the exam in your cover letter/at the interview. 6) For the college time just put when you'll get your degree like Expected May 2015, but that's just me. 7) remove your high school
Hope this helps.
Just follow the M&I format.
Also, I'm confused on how your online university would be better then your state school.
Like the others said
1) Get rid of the exec summary 2) Education on top 3) I personally would get rid of your Linkedin 4) Get rid of that level 1 candidate nonsense (it doesn't mean anything)! 5) I would put some of your finance experience (such as the prop trading firm) higher up 6) Wouldn't put Microsoft Office, and things like Morningstar on your technical skills
Hope I helped!
At a glance I notice that you mix verb tenses in this resume. Please attempt to remain consistent.
-B www.bburkeconsulting.com
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