Resume Help - Hope to break into a F500 Rotational Program

Getting up off the lazy train and was hoping for some harsh critics to look at my resume. Go to a large State School and waiting to hear back from previous internship as to whether or not I have a job. Regardless, it is not want I want to do and hope to break into ER/IB/F500 Rotational at company of interest. I know that I have no experience in that field so it is a long shot.
Little background
-Big 10 State School(Not UofM, NW)
-Past summer internship (Oil Equipment Manufacturing Company) 2 Year Finance Rotation Program
-In FLDP and was selected with 4 other interns out of 12 to come back for FT interview process
-Worked with legal and tax department on joint venture between department X and company Y.
-Created JV's on excel for controllers across multiple countries to upload into their SAP systems roughly $1 billion
-Did a small amount of work on Hyperion in order to compare current and previous intercompany balances to find 14 million Out of Balance
-Currently play club hockey which is much larger time commitment than expected so minimal time commitment in other clubs
-Have invested around 5 thousand of my own money into stocks although little thought has been put in other than looking for high dividend yield, large cap companies.

Thank you in advance for help

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