Resume that explains non-traditional background

I'd appreciate any advice on my resume construction--specifically, my main points are how to effectively communicate my non-traditional work/school timeline, and my post-MBA short term positions without looking like a job-hopping flake. I have good explanations which I can easily convey in an interview, but the issue seems to be landing an interview at the moment...

My story:

After high school I went to a trade school and worked as a mechanic/operating engineer. I was pretty successful and had a management position before enrolling in college about 10 years later, followed by the MBA.

First job post MBA-the company was restructuring (3 CEO's in about a year) and my position wasn't safe. (Good move--after I left they send a bunch of the finance group across the country, and eliminated the rest). Rather than risk it, I took the job I have now, which has turned out to be different from what I was lead to believe, and as such is a bad fit for my skills, and future goals.

My goal is an analytical position that enables me to utilize my industry operating experience (corp. development or cost analytics--similar to the role post-MBA). I've included the summary as a way to explain myself, and I'm using two pages to show the logical progression from engineering to finance throughout the industry.

Thanks everyone.

http://www.razume.com/documents/31122

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AMLady:

Drop the summary
Where is your education? If you have an MBA that is significant enough to include in the resume, over the management position.

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. Interestingly, I think your question gave me even more advice--the education info is on the second page, which I should also probably get rid of...

One louder.
 

The format looks nice and I personally do not think it is too non-traditional. It annoyed me a little to read though because sentences are wrapped. Contents need more polish for sure.

 

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