Looks a lot better.

Since you have space at the bottom and are still in college, I would say add an interests section and make your name bigger at the top to balance the space at the top with the bottom

Id move the 3rd bullet in the HF internship to the top so that you can be asked about it and explain the fund, etc

Good luck

 

I'd say add an interests section as alpha recommended. I'd also question the inconsistency of putting an italicized explanation under only some roles - consistency is king my friend. also, im not sure why you blacked out the right which i assume is location rather than making it generic, but you have no location by club lacrosse, which is incosistent

 
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