Resume Review Please - Looking for a BB internship this summer

Looking for a BB internship this summer. Constructive criticism is much appreciated.

Thanks

3 Comments

m56

CO

11y

Get rid of Office Suite in your skills. Also, you could shorten some of the bullets under the IB Internship -- some seem like repeats of each other.

VC

11y

Best Response

Make the font size on your name bigger; you want it to stand out
Put relevant coursework under GPA so there's not the extra line
I would put "Work Experience" rather than "Relevant Experience"
The IBanking experience section is good, but I'm wondering if it wouldn't be better to first have a "Transactions Experience" type sub-section and then put the more general bullets after. Anyone else have thoughts?
For the industry groups under "Lead Analyst" I would italicize them for clarity
You say "outperformed gains...compared to" what is the 3.4%?
Put "Leadership Experience" instead of just "Leadership"
Other people will disagree, but I think putting MS Office under skills if you were born after 1987 is silly

Hope that is helpful

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11y

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