Rez Critique - College graduate
Graduated from college in may 2011
I have no ibanking internships, but am looking into breaking in through regional/boutique investment banks in my area
This is my revised resume.
rip it apart and let me know whats garabage
GPA is kinda low, if you're going to list it at all, round it up to 3.2/4.0. Keep the decimal places the same.
I also don't get the "generated a projected $35 million sales increase" phrase. So was that just a forecasted figure or did the sales actually increase? Sounds like it actually hypothetically happened.
Your experience is not in chronological order.
Some of the bullets are awkwardly phrased (maybe I'm just tired). Also, why are you capitalizing everything in your interests section?
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