Rip my resume apart.

I am a student trying to break into finance through an internship. Please suggest suitable options based on my profile. I am primarily interested in Investment banking, Personal Wealth Management and Trading. I could really use some advice on how to proceed.

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the good points: 1. 1 page - it's the ideal; 2. content - you seem to be involved in a few projects and a good GPA on the BSc (I'd either put your current GPA in the MSc if it's good, otherwise just remove that line); 3. Moderate formatting is your friend: but don't just use bold. you can make it more intuitive to look at by reducing 1 size of the font on the bulletpoints, highlighting the most important (role/company);

to improve: 1. Work experience should be at the above, just below education (and after you finish Uni, switch); 2. Slim down: I already have a migraine just looking at all those "certificate earned..." on the online courses sections - just put the year or "July 2016".

 

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