First language not English, there will be grammar mistakes to correct. Feel free to point them out.
I honestly didn't do much at the asset manager other than doing utility stock pitches as my project so I'm not sure what to put there. Not gonna bother blacking out school name since some people think it's a target and others don't. Thanks in advance.
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i think higher of you for not blacking it out FWIW, it doesn't really matter if your school is a target or not if you're qualified, you're qualified (though NYU stern is fantastic)
anyway, as for your resume...
sure gandu, feel free to shoot me a PM
Thanks!!
IB gig - first 2 bullets sound too similar. Use public comps instead of "similar public..." Use "Assembled" instead of "Put together"
Trading gig - say distributed to traders, if you know how many, then include it.
Bullet 4 on BD gig is smaller than the rest.
Business club - use another word besides "doing" - maybe "performing"
Otherwise it looks solid and you'll definitely be a top candidate.
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