http://www.razume.com/documents/24936
Junior, no SA yet, looking for AM but will basically take anything at this point.
1 interview, top 4 AUM back office, no offer
Still in my current internship, don't know if i put this right.
Really appreciate any comments, feel free to shit on me.
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Too much blank space.
Your resume should only feature: numbers, awards, and achievements. It is not necessary to list what you did in a particular job, but rather how you overachieved. The thought process to recruiters is that everyone will do roughly the same thing in any particular role- your resume should highlight how you outperformed anyone else.
Especially with banking, your clientele is going to speak empirical data and numbers- of which you are severely lacking. Think about how you can highlight your work- you have the experience on there, you just need to turn it so that you are selling yourself.
Any scholarships / dean's list type stuff you can add to fill out education? What about SAT scores, I'd include if 2050-2100 or higher.
Also, hiking and camping, sweet deal.
This might just be me, but I don't like taking up half my resume with one experience. I keep my experiences to no more than 4 bullets, and throw a bunch of them on my resume
Wow thanks for the great advice everyone.
upod01: I see what you are saying. I think i can rewrite those bullet points, it's just hard with my internship because I've only been there since the last week in Feb.
jbert112: I wish. No scholarships, 1830 SATs. I did get asked to do an independent study in financial modeling with excel & VBA by a professor....it is for the entirety of senior year. That is basically my only academic achievement
Thanks again for the support
Doesn't look bad.
But how are you enrolled in the CFA Preparation School for June 2013 if the material for next year isn't even released yet? The LOS's change constantly every year.
I should reword that. My school's finance dept. has a CFA lvl 1 prep program. We havent really started yet but I am enrolled and the school agreed to pay for it
Does everyone agree on this listing the SATs thing? I got a 2250, but I've never listed it just cause it's a high school thing and I'm getting ready to leave college
I think it makes sense to list your SAT score, if it's really good. It's probably the one thing that all applicants have aside from GPA so it gives them another easy way to compare.
4 bullet points for the item you want to be highlighted the most 3 bullet points for the items (1-2) that are important but secondary to above 2 bullet points to everything related to business but not very cool/impressive
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