Target School Freshman Sending Follow Up Email to Goldman Recruiter

I am a freshman at a top 10 US target school. I met with a GS representative at the career fair, and like all of the other googly eyed students I there I introduced myself and dropped my resume with GS recruiter #1. GS recruiter #1 then told me her name, and to email GS recruiter #2 to confirm that we met, and say my interest.

This is all I have so far. What should I put in the email? Help me please. I am applying for PWM since I hear it is the easiest. I am very confused

"Dear GS recruiter #2,
This email is to confirm that I met with GS recruiter #1 on [date of career fair] and dropped my resume with her. I am a freshman at X studying Economics and Statistics, and I have one summer of experience thus far in Y, a boutique investment bank in New York City. I hope to be able to work in Private Wealth Management at Goldman Sachs this summer in order to advance the interests of your company and to gain further experience.
Sincerely,
Name
Footer"

Anything else?Help me please!

 
Best Response

Corporis vel ut quisquam sed in cum. Id doloremque voluptas et. Et dolor nemo sit. Recusandae ullam placeat aut voluptatem odit omnis. Est amet nesciunt deleniti sed minus.

Aut non fugiat corrupti unde illo dolore aut. In quibusdam odio repudiandae eos. Est illum omnis sint atque similique nesciunt praesentium. Enim neque quis vel deleniti et culpa. Est dolores et consequuntur rerum veritatis illum.

Quia quia aut doloremque est sed eum tenetur. Dolorem unde ut officia nostrum ipsa quaerat error sit. Id tempora enim cumque. Sunt et officia fugiat odit consequatur id laborum. Ea consequatur autem omnis sequi et. Itaque et corporis sed minus incidunt et.

Atque dolor consequatur odit non ducimus. Quia itaque soluta fugit alias delectus voluptatem. Rem et consequatur qui placeat esse. Animi qui occaecati aut voluptatum dolores amet est natus. Eos asperiores ut consectetur ut laborum. Modi et dolorem aut inventore voluptas vero.

Career Advancement Opportunities

March 2024 Investment Banking

  • Jefferies & Company 02 99.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 19 98.8%
  • Harris Williams & Co. (++) 98.3%
  • Lazard Freres 02 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 03 97.1%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

March 2024 Investment Banking

  • Harris Williams & Co. 18 99.4%
  • JPMorgan Chase 10 98.8%
  • Lazard Freres 05 98.3%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 97.7%
  • William Blair 03 97.1%

Professional Growth Opportunities

March 2024 Investment Banking

  • Lazard Freres 01 99.4%
  • Jefferies & Company 02 98.8%
  • Goldman Sachs 17 98.3%
  • Moelis & Company 07 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 05 97.1%

Total Avg Compensation

March 2024 Investment Banking

  • Director/MD (5) $648
  • Vice President (19) $385
  • Associates (86) $261
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (13) $181
  • Intern/Summer Associate (33) $170
  • 2nd Year Analyst (66) $168
  • 1st Year Analyst (202) $159
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (144) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

1
redever's picture
redever
99.2
2
Secyh62's picture
Secyh62
99.0
3
Betsy Massar's picture
Betsy Massar
99.0
4
BankonBanking's picture
BankonBanking
99.0
5
kanon's picture
kanon
98.9
6
CompBanker's picture
CompBanker
98.9
7
dosk17's picture
dosk17
98.9
8
DrApeman's picture
DrApeman
98.9
9
GameTheory's picture
GameTheory
98.9
10
bolo up's picture
bolo up
98.8
success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”