The resume forum isnt as active as this one, so I figured I'd post it here
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Anything you think I should fix/correct?
I dont care if you destroy it lol, any feedback is helpful
Mod Edit: The resume forum isn't as active, but it exists for a reason. Those who do visit that forum are willing to provide feedback.
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I would round the gpa one more decimal place, and also use different wording the second time that you use "selected from a competitive applicant pool"
Use standard formatting in regards to accomplishments and tasks completed.....Participated, led, initiated X and as a result Y. I think resumes should always have some quantifiable aspect and in the least be results driven
Taking a quick look:
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Your experience is good but needs to be more punchy and to the point - state clearly what you've achieved and learned. For example, the bullet point starting with "developed technicalskills by being given examples..." could become more like "worked through position reconciliation and sales support example cases and developed technical understanding of....". Another example is when you say "participated in activities such as an ipo case study and a trade simulation" - it's better to phrase it like "completed an IPO case study and came [3rd] in Trading Simulation" You also repeat "chosen/selected from a competitive pool" - can change this to "was one of [20] people who were invited to attend..."
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