What positions can this resume attract(attempt #2)
Attached is a new one.
Assume it's 2018, what kind of job does this attract, what kind of fields, etc.? Just curious
Thanks
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Attached is a new one.
Assume it's 2018, what kind of job does this attract, what kind of fields, etc.? Just curious
Thanks
Attachment | Size |
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resume wso.doc 32 KB | 32 KB |
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Decent enough but would need to do some more relevant finance experience to be more competitive
Being a CFO at small business for a few years, a PE internship isn't enough from the work experience side?
are you already accepted into Stanford....? and pdf please even if you're uploading on wso...get into the habit
Yes, HCP program. Other places too.
Given that you only have one page to work with for your resume, you might want to reconsider the space you allocated to each work experience based on relevance (Put more stuff into the CFO and PE sections as the other two don't seem very relevant). The section on your stint as a CFO should also be made to sound more finance-related with some quantifiable results (at present it gives off more of a general manager or controller feel in my opinion). Also why have you only included a GPA for one of your schools? Some spelling and grammar aspects also caught my eye e.g: Microeconomic(s) under UT coursework, Performed financial models under PE section should probably be Constructed or something like that, some of your bullet points have periods at the end, and in your final section you list the word "Skills" twice which is a bit redundant.
Exactly the criticism I was looking for...attempt 3 coming later.
Ops.
Fluency in English is not a skill. If BS and MSF done in US, that's expected.
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