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Financial Analyst resume.. please be harsh

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by Ken819 User's RSS Feed (Chimp, 3 Banana Points Points) on 2/25/10 at 9:28pm

I am a Senior undergrad, have a poor GPA and had a 1240 on SATs. Not sure if I should disclose that, but do have a decent amount of experience. Havent taken GMAT. Am looking for any internship/entry level job as a financial analyst. My personal investing track record so far is very good.. it is the strong point in my resume.

http://www.razume.com/documents/13987

Please let me know if you have any advice

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Please Help_Junior Seeking IB SA Position_Thank You!

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by banzhidiao User's RSS Feed (Senior Chimp, 22 Banana Points Points) on 12/7/09 at 3:23am

http://www.razume.com/documents/12869

Hello everyone,

I am a junior majoring in Finance at a Non-target public school. I have been interested in the banking industry since my freshman year and I have tried everything I could to prepare myself for the future challenges.

I am currently working on my Summer analyst applications, and I would really appreciate any advice/suggestions regarding my resume.

Thank you in advance for your time and help!

Many thanks,

http://www.razume.com/documents/12869

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Please Critique - Recent MBA grad looking for IB oppt. at MM/Boutique

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by Optimist User's RSS Feed (Senior Monkey, 68 Banana Points Points) on 12/3/09 at 2:45pm

http://www.razume.com/documents/12820

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Resume Question - show side consulting-type projects?

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by smt123 User's RSS Feed (Senior Chimp, 29 Banana Points Points) on 10/19/09 at 6:51pm

At a semi-target trying to get into ibd, and trying to finalize my resume for SA recruiting. I've had one quality internship, and in place one of the many non-business regular college jobs I have to choose from to fill up resume space, I'm trying to show the personal consulting-type work I've done, ie build website and small marketing tasks to help increase rev (just for a family businesses/community business w/ties to), and I'll be able to add a line in for any project that I might do in the near future.

Would this look more valuable than the regular restaurant/etc job if I can explain it correctly on my resume?

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Bruce Wayne's Resume

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by bwggpb User's RSS Feed (Baboon, 100 Banana Points Points) on 8/28/09 at 10:33pm

Hi,

This is Bruce Wayne's Resume...What do you think about it? Could Bateman be able to land interviews at BB with that?

Thank you for your suggestions (format, content (work experience, education...), language and so on...)

http://www.razume.com/documents/11472

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Resume - Give it to me hard...

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by peventure User's RSS Feed (Senior Chimp, 19 Banana Points Points) on 7/15/09 at 3:59pm

Hey Everyone,

I'm looking for some advice and critiques of my resume. I'm 1 yr out of undergrad working at a small private investment firm. I was a little unsure of how much stuff I should still include from undergrad.

Also, I recently completed an alternative investments program at Harvard (through the extension/continuing education program) that my firm paid for. Now, I will be the first to admit that all I had to do was pay for the program. There was no rigorous admissions standards like Harvard undergrad or HBS. However, the class was taught by a Harvard MBA and definitely worth my time. Its on my resume now, but I welcome opinions on it.

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Resume critiques/comments needed and welcome!

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by tbm24 User's RSS Feed (Senior Chimp, 25 Banana Points Points) on 6/3/09 at 11:19pm

Hi everyone. Just signed up for the forum, and I already love this place!

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Resume Review

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by lapa dapa ding dong User's RSS Feed (Chimp, 15 Banana Points Points) on 4/3/09 at 12:17am

Hello Guys,

Thanks you for your input last time. I incorporated all your opinions and further tailored my resume.

I greatly appreciate you all for taking the time to look over my resume, there were a lot of things i missed and because of all of you I noticed my mistakes.

I hope you guys will look over my resume again.. Updated one!!

thanks in advance

http://razume.com/documents/9548

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by lapa dapa ding dong User's RSS Feed (Chimp, 15 Banana Points Points) on 4/3/09 at 12:11am

Hello Guys,

I am a recent graduate who is interested(nay determined!!) to land a job in the private equity world. I have been following wso for a hell of a long time, and I truly admire all the resume critiques by all the members. I have worked on my resume for a while, however it is far from perfect and would greatly appreciate any criticism/critique.

Thank you in advance for taking the time to look at my resume.

p.s. the resume seems to be spread over two pages, however the original is fitted into one page!

http://razume.com/documents/9127

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by indian-banker User's RSS Feed (Senior Gorilla, 802 Banana Points Points) on 2/16/09 at 1:11pm

It seems, I've been getting shot in the foot through this recruiting season. It's been a pretty annoying recruiting season and I'm starting to wonder if it's got to do with my resume. Would appreciate any input.

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Please provide some Resume feedback

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by RCnyc User's RSS Feed (Senior Chimp, 24 Banana Points Points) on 1/29/09 at 3:33am

http://razume.com/documents/6646

I am an engineering major, going for finance. Please provide some feedback for the content of my resume and if I can further bankify my resume. Appreciate any advice. Thanks!

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by NewYorkBora User's RSS Feed (Chimp, 7 Banana Points Points) on 1/19/09 at 7:28pm

Hey

I will be attending a career fair in the near future and wanted to spruce up my resume. I am looking for a summer internship, but not anything super competitive. I amm starting a spring internship soon and really want to include it in the resume. I feel that it will help me land a first round interview. I know some of you may object this, if so maybe you can help me include it in a better way.

Thanks

http://www.mediafire.com/?ztmt1fvmgzi

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