resume

I've heard great things about mergersandinquisitions.com's proofreading service to make them more appealing for IBanks. Is there a similar service for S&T? or Should I just send my resume to mergersandinquisitions.com and tell them I'm leaning toward S&T rather than banking.

Which should I list first under the extracurriculars section of my resume: club lacrosse or a club I founded and am president of?

I currently have my small club listed first but people seem more interested in lacrosse and often skip right over the club and start with questions about lacrosse. I obviously want to have most important listed first.

thanks

I did a PWM internship a few months ago. What's the best title to use for my resume?
Wealth Management Intern? Financial Advisor Intern?

Is there a general opinion among reviewers on resume white space? Is it better to go for the clean, generous margins look at the expense of detailed extracirricular descriptions (even just one line, and only for ones where the applicant has a leadership position), or to fit in detailed descriptions of both work experience and extracirricular leadership by pushing the margins out to say 0.15?

I guess it boils down to an asthetic (not making the reviewers eyes bleed from so much text) vs. detail (giving a description of relevant extracirriculars so as to accentuate experience and desire in those all-important 30 seconds) argument

Here's my resume:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/6678855/Resume-an-On
note:In distinctions, I was offered the Loran, and Arbor awards, but declined them to go to the ivy.

So I recently (2 days ago) submitted my finalized resume to a few companies, after having it proof read by several friends.

I got a call today for one of the jobs I applied to, to schedule a phone interview. About 5 minutes ago I got a call from the same person, wanting to confirm my graduation date. Apparently my resume states Dec 2009 for graduation, when I actually graduate in Dec of this year.

Now I know it is my fault, and I have no idea how it happened, but heres the bigger issue:

The job that called me for the phone interview didn't care, just wanted to make sure I graduate this year. But, another job I applied for was through a connection I have, and I simply forwarded my resume to someone who requested it. I want this job 10x more than the other, and I'm afraid that they will see the 2009 graduation date and just pass by me.

Could use some comments on my resume if anyone is willing to take a quick look. Not going for IB jobs, so it is nothing spectacular.

I need feedback today if possible as I need to apply to a couple of jobs ASAP, so please PM/email me if you have some free time.

Thanks.