You might as well include your social security too. Are you fr dude? take down your resume before it's sold to some hacker or something. It's internet man, can't be putting stuff with with so much personal info.

 
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Every bullet point should start with a past tense verb, so change lines like "Six figures sales" to something like "Generated sales in the amount of XXX". Also, you have "helped" listed twice, replace one of them to say "assisted" or some other synonym.

Consider putting your GPA out of 4.0 so " 3.6/4.0"

Consider formatting the dates as "Dec" instead of "December", it will look a bit cleaner.

Remember, keep formatting consistent. Maybe consider removing community college. If you decide to keep it fix the dates to show when you left/graduated.

Under skills and interest remove "(been to 15 countries)" in most interviews they will ask you about your interests and that would be a good talking point. Consider adding some more unique interests. Opposed to saying classical music, list a specific artist.

Under projects, you have to keep the formatting consistent. For example, you have Deloitte case competition, you should list "semi-finalist" directly underneath it as your title.

 

Thanks for the advice! I agree with your recommendations. My thinking for the interests section was if I included "(been to 15 countries)", it would show that I was an avid traveler and maybe spark more interests to talk about it.

 

From a first glance, make sure all verbs are in the same tense (under the Bank teller section there were some present tense and some past tense). I personally like having all past tense. Also, if you use a comma, make sure there is a subject in the second half of the sentence or simply remove the comma (again saw this error under the bank teller section)

 

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