Can someone help with editing this 'title' on my resume?
Hello all,
Just working on a paragraph and was wondering if i can get some help in the re-wording:
"(Country) raised (Nationality) with over 6 years of solid trading floor experience. Culturally intelligent and quadrilingual individual who has worked in various multi-cultural environments. Completing graduate studies in Shanghai and ready to return back to Hong Kong to apply my expertise towards maximizing organizational performance." Thanks all
You say "culturally intelligent" and then say that you worked in "various multi-cultural environments." Seems like you're saying the same exact thing twice.
I don't see the need for the word "solid," maybe say something like algorithmic/fudamental/etc.
Thanks vm, cheers
What space are you looking to enter? May not need the intro at all. A lot of roles aren't expecting an introductory paragraph on a resume
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