Critique my resume - Don't hold back
New to the site so don't hold back. Let me know what's good and bad. All input is helpful. Thanks in advance.
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Ding #1- Fail, there is a specific forum for critiquing resumes.
Ding #2- Softball? Really? Wait unless your a girl then ok.
My apologies, I thought I posted it in the resume forum.
Ha nope, I'm a guy. Softball is big in Asia for expats and it's a nice taste of Americana.
You're in the right forum. Put it on razume.com so we can actually see it without too much trouble.
http://www.razume.com/documents/19026
Too many black spots... How can we judge your resume if we don't even know if you go to a target or not? And we don't know the names of the companies you interned at?
It's all there now. Thanks.
Format-wise it looks good. Hard to give input without knowing what you need the resume for. Is this a general review? or are you applying for a certain type of position?
HF mostly. Entry-level, just trying to get my foot in the door.
I noticed you completed the MS Commerce at UVA, could I PM you to get some insight? I have been considering this program for sometime.
Sure thing. Happy to answer any questions you have.
I've never seen the education at the bottom of the page before - why did you choose to do that? Also, you should specify what "coding" means.
I moved education lower because I am almost 3 years removed from undergrad and I have a year of full-time experience. When I left my FT job, I was told it was more important to highlight that than rest on the laurels of college.
As for the HTML section, by "coding" I mean that I have experience creating HTML websites. Is there a better way to express that? Thanks for your help.
Apologies, I thought there was a comma between "HTML" and "coding".
I think you should move the education to the top - you're still relatively entry-level (I assume you're looking at 2nd/3rd year analyst and 1st year associate positions), so your alma mater and GPA will still be the #1 and #2 things a recruiter looks at. Maybe if you were 5 years out with significant experience, it'd be a different story, but that's not really the case here.
Gracias.
Any other suggestions? I'm in talks with a number of HF right now so I want to solidify this thing before shooting it off to them. Aiming for an equities or commodities desk. Are there really any big changes I should make to differentiate between those two given my career level? Thanks.
why did you move to Macau to become an intern? Hated your job in Richmond that much?
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