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OneWire post for HC analyst. See if you can find the mistake:

Title: Investment Banking Department, Healthcare, Analyst (San Francisco)

Location: San Francisco, CA

Group Description: The San Francisco (SF) Healthcare group is a tightly knit team with years of industry experience, offering a strong small-group culture with the large-group resources of Credit Suisse's combined Health Care groups in New York, SF and London. The group focuses on financing transactions and strategic advisory work for biotech pharmaceutical firms across all regions, with clients ranging from high-growth private companies to leading large-cap public firms.

Role: Investment Banking Analysts work on a broad array of domestic and international transactions. Our bankers execute mergers and acquisitions, raise capital for clients (including initial public offerings), guide companies through financial restructuring, discuss strategic alternatives geared towards competitive growth, and provide other advisory services. As an analyst you will work alongside some of the industry’s best and brightest technology bankers and have exposure to senior people at a diverse set of companies.

 

There needs to be a comma after the word "strong" in the first sentence. SB me.

Use commas to separate two or more coordinate adjectives that describe the same noun. Be sure never to add an extra comma between the final adjective and the noun itself or to use commas with non-coordinate adjectives.

 

lol...the op is talking about technology. Healthcare is healthcare and tech is tech. Even if it's biotech it's still not considered tech.

but seriously, why did i just spend 1 minutes of my life looking through the job post/??????

 

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