Final CV for summer internship. Please review.
http://www.razume.com/documents/16634
Thanks
FOR S&T btw.
http://www.razume.com/documents/16634
Thanks
FOR S&T btw.
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one of your achievement points is "decided we should take longer breaks and start later in the morning" hahaha
That whole Duke of edinburgh section is just waffle, actually a lot of it seems just a bunch of waffle tbh
lots lots more polishing. remove the periods at the end of each bullet. dont understand your first bullet 'calculated the VAT the able to claim back'... what?
second experience could use a some more polishing and embelishment as well. hell, go as far as to say you implemented changes to the floor plan and product layout etc to enhance customer experienc and increase sales; was well received by manager and regular customers
might be a lot of bs, but you just need to make some stuff up or else your experiences are just too lacking. just brainwash yourself to believe you done some of those things and all teh details that comes with it.
for that edinburg experience.... really dont like your 'decided to take longer breaks thus being more energetic part', maybe you could twist it to be say... "provided positive support and encouragement to help team pull through the expedition (was this a hike or sth?), taking breaks at critical timing to ensure team was being pushed hard enough whilst maintaining enthusiasm and energy'
sth like that, and if asked how you decided on when to take breaks in an interview, just bs about how you observe the status of each person, the conversations you carried out with them while they were struggling or not happy with and made those deicisons. (i keep thinking this is a hike or sth, but if its not, apologies'
and at least add in a freaking section title/heading for the last part, sth like 'miscellaneous' 'Others' 'Interest' 'other experiences' or sth is better than no heading and just jumping into them like this.
just my 2cents but the resume can definitely use a lot more work. know the experience is lacking, but can still try to polish your language and the points you emphasize as well as exaggerate/make up things a little more.
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