Harsh Feedback - Junior at State School
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Junior at non target and will intern at a boutique IB this summer (public finance). I want a shot at FT MM or BB interviews this fall, suggestions and criticism?
Other experience I could include:
- took this off: Student Activities Judicial Board, Delegate
- could get a position with our Finance Society (maybe VP Finance)
- could get a spot on our Associated Student Finance Board
Tense in your first experience Assist and Wrote... since its current shouldn't it be write?
You spelled Capital wrong dude.
@blackfinacier - I only wrote a few of them, not an ongoing project. I'll just change it because it sounds strange.
@laudrup10 - Wow embarrassing, thanks for the catch.
Once you put the boutique experience in your resume, I would definitely try to keep the non-profit experience. Thus, I would do a combination of the following to make room: shorten/delete the real estate thing, shorten the AM experience, or put the business leader award up in honors.
Thanks laudrup10, good recommendation, I was thinking of doing something similar. So...
Experience: - Boutique - Merrill - PWM - non-profit Organizations: - Treasurer - Leadership award
Should I try to get a position in our Finance Society or as a member of our AS Finance Board (multi-mil budget) and move the leadership award to the top? Or would that be a waste of effort better spent on networking?
Good luck.
Well if having one of those leadership positions would help in your networking efforts, then absolutely. If you have time to do both without drastically affecting your networking then do it as well.
@englishtoffee - I will definitely lighten the Capital Management one and increase Merrill. I will also be getting rid of the real estate experience. However, i'd rather save space than add more relevant coursework and the left justified headers are a matter of preference. Thanks for your input, let me know any further thoughts.
@laudrup10 - Let me rephrase, it wouldn't really effect my networking, just was wondering if when sending out resumes if Finance Org. positions > Leadership Award under Organization header. Thanks for the help.
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