Is there anyone willing to review a veterans admission essay to Wharton?

Hello everyone,

I am applying to Wharton and I would appreciate it if someone that has some experience with the topic would lend me advice on the essay. The deadline is coming up and I am a darkhorse to begin with but I want to put forth the most competitive application possible. Thank you all.

Best,
Chris

 

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