Looking for Constructive Criticism on Resume

Hey everyone,

I am graduating from college in December and will be going out for full-time recruitment this fall, looking to get into real estate either in investment sales, debt placement (HFF/Eastdil type of shop), or real estate banking but I'm very open to other similar positions. I've been trying to get my resume as polished as possible before I start networking/applying to jobs. Please feel free to give me as much feedback as possible or tell me it sucks, I appreciate tough love and brutal honesty. I'll post a link to it here, I altered it a bit for privacy purposes. Thanks a lot. Resume

 

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