Looking for CV feedback for a summer internship in London

pic of cv

Would appreciate any feedback on this. I go to an rg non target uni, the dream was IB but I'm aware that's very ambitious considering what the CV currently looks like, I think I'll target transaction advisory and maybe boutique IB for the summer internship cycle. Had 2 questions:

  • The treasurer role that's on there is for next academic year so I haven't actually done anything for that yet, so the bullet points are basically made up (but I will be doing them in the future). I had a committee position in my first year but did literally nothing as the society didn't function due to the pandemic. Should I keep it there? If I get interviewed before October I wouldn't be able to discuss being a treasurer 

  • Should I apply for a mix of London internships and regional ones or just London if my goal would be to work in London? How much more competitive is, e.g. transaction advisory big 4 London vs the same at Manchester? 

 

1) get rid of career objective, this is NOT an industry standard.

2) education section is notably much fatter than work experience which is never a good look, even for internships. Talk more about your university soc position and include some figures. + add any volunteering you have done and a proper extra-curricular section

3) exclude crypto from interests, makes you seem unprofessional at worst and a finance nerd at best.

Generally needs more stats and figures.

 

1) get rid of career objective, this is NOT an industry standard.

2) education section is notably much fatter than work experience which is never a good look, even for internships. Talk more about your university soc position and include some figures. + add any volunteering you have done and a proper extra-curricular section

3) exclude crypto from interests, makes you seem unprofessional at worst and a finance nerd at best.

Generally needs more stats and figures.

Thanks for advice

 
Most Helpful

As the other person said:

  • Remove career objective
  • Jesus lord reduce the size of that education section, it's very obvious you're compensating. Also the alignment in that section is off. The School is supposed to be on the same line as the location, not the date. The qualification type (A-Levels/GCSEs) should be underneath that in italics.
  • Treasurer and Insight Day shouldn't be in work experience, should be in Extracurriculars. Expand on treasurer (although in the other comment it says you haven't started, in which case idk why it says Nov 2020 on there). 
  • I know you didn't do very much as a kitchen porter but you're going to have to make it sound better than that. You need to quantify everything you can and talk about specific achievements rather than your responsibilities (this applies to all your experiences).
  • Take off touch typist as a skill. Take off basic understanding off Python and Java. Unless you're proficient to a level you could use it at work, it's not useful.
  • Take off crypto as an interest.
  • Capitalise the names of your certificates. 
 

Thanks for the advice, that was very comprehensive! I've made changes based on all your bullet points: 

I do agree this looks far better. I'm just hoping to get any vaguely finance related internship (audit, regional ib, transaction services, tier 3 consulting) and then after potentially a target masters - I think if I maintain a high first from my rg uni this should be attainable. Thanks again for the help 

 

Eligendi aperiam earum ea occaecati. Id impedit eum ipsam harum nihil soluta. Omnis consectetur laborum tempore praesentium maxime nostrum ullam qui.

Career Advancement Opportunities

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Jefferies & Company 02 99.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 19 98.8%
  • Harris Williams & Co. New 98.3%
  • Lazard Freres 02 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 03 97.1%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Harris Williams & Co. 18 99.4%
  • JPMorgan Chase 10 98.8%
  • Lazard Freres 05 98.3%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 97.7%
  • William Blair 03 97.1%

Professional Growth Opportunities

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Lazard Freres 01 99.4%
  • Jefferies & Company 02 98.8%
  • Goldman Sachs 17 98.3%
  • Moelis & Company 07 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 05 97.1%

Total Avg Compensation

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Director/MD (5) $648
  • Vice President (19) $385
  • Associates (86) $261
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (13) $181
  • Intern/Summer Associate (33) $170
  • 2nd Year Analyst (66) $168
  • 1st Year Analyst (205) $159
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (145) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

1
redever's picture
redever
99.2
2
Secyh62's picture
Secyh62
99.0
3
Betsy Massar's picture
Betsy Massar
99.0
4
BankonBanking's picture
BankonBanking
99.0
5
CompBanker's picture
CompBanker
98.9
6
dosk17's picture
dosk17
98.9
7
GameTheory's picture
GameTheory
98.9
8
kanon's picture
kanon
98.9
9
numi's picture
numi
98.8
10
Jamoldo's picture
Jamoldo
98.8
success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”