Quite doubtful this would get past an IB screen at a BB or MM without a rewrite.
Line spacing is inconsistent.
Typos/grammar.
Don't list three bullets for your finance club and then only three bullets on your internships. I'd say one bullet max for both extracurriculars because you did nothing important there anyway.
Not one bullet adequately outlined a situation, action, and result.
With 9 prior internships/jobs I'm sure you have some good content to put down so just be more descriptive and try again.
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Quite doubtful this would get past an IB screen at a BB or MM without a rewrite.
Line spacing is inconsistent.
Typos/grammar.
Don't list three bullets for your finance club and then only three bullets on your internships. I'd say one bullet max for both extracurriculars because you did nothing important there anyway.
Not one bullet adequately outlined a situation, action, and result.
With 9 prior internships/jobs I'm sure you have some good content to put down so just be more descriptive and try again.
Ratione repudiandae nesciunt deserunt. Rerum quis suscipit qui itaque quos distinctio iure. Tempore consequuntur pariatur sit non et modi. Similique facilis incidunt et eaque necessitatibus quo.
Nam veniam voluptatem dolore sequi. Fugiat et modi ratione asperiores. Quasi perspiciatis aut dignissimos corporis quo non. Qui sit earum eaque dicta quaerat.
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