Please critique my cold emailSubscribe
I'm a freshman at a non-target currently interning at PWM. However, it is extremely unfulfilling as all I do is cold call so now I am trying to obtain a new internship for this summer. I'm targeting investment banking boutiques and hedge funds. Below is what I include in my email.
Hello Mr/ Mrs. ...
I hope all is well.
My name is (name) and I am currently a first year student at (non target) studying finance. I am seeking an Investment Banking internship for this summer and would like to speak to you about any opportunities (insert boutique) may have. Do you have time for a quick call this week?
For more context on my background, I have attached my resume below.
Thank you for your time and I hope to speak to you soon.
I try to get straight to the point when sending my emails because they probably know I want something. Would appreciate any constructive criticism.