Any insight, reviews, or criticism is WELCOME! Please, tear it apart!
Also, please let me know if any major revisions should be made.
Here it is: http://www.razume.com/documents/26117
At the moment, I am unsure about the Education part being almost half the essay, but I wanted to elaborate on some of the course material as some firms would look at my course title and feel that it is irrelevant.
I am looking to apply for someor MA Consulting firms, not sure if I have a shot, but I at least want to try and increase my chances.
Anyway, thanks in advance for all your comments.