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Investment Banking Analyst, Global Healthcare
• Perform financial modeling and valuation, comparable company and precedent transaction analyses
• Participate in deal execution: draft prospectuses and bank books; write internal Screening and Committee memoranda; coordinate with client and internal teams / product groups; conduct financial, business and accounting due diligence
• Closed 7 transactions; project experience includes sell-/buy-side M&A, LBO, IPO and financing assignments
• Selected Transaction Experience:
o Sponsors X / Y in their acquisition of Company A ($XX billion ) and related financing ($XX billion)
 Created market analysis showing favorable trends in the ASO/PPO market despite regulatory uncertainty; led to Sponsor X remaining in the auction process until the finalround and ultimately winning the mandate
 Built and drove lbo model to sensitize financing assumptions and sponsor return
 Served as lead liaison between Global Healthcare, Financial Sponsors and Leveraged Finance groups
o Company X in its potential acquisition of Company Y (~$350 million)
 Built and drove merger and DCF models; developed analysis to show the viability of OpCo / PropCo structure; conducted market analysis to highlight benefits of expanding IRF portfolio and diversifying into LTCHs
o “Healthcare Services Provider” in its refinancing of Senior Secured Credit Facilities
($1.0 billion)
 Worked directly with CFO to build refinancing and covenant compliance models incorporating 5 financing scenarios based on the Company’s objectives of de-leveraging, adding additional covenant flexibility and managing maturity schedule