Please tear apart my resume - 3rd Year Analyst

I'm 2/3 of the way through my FLDP and am looking at other very select opportunities. I havent updated my resume since college so all my FT experience is new here. Please tear it apart.

Any advice is much appreciated.. just trying to gauge how this will be viewed by a 3rd party.

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I'd definitely recommend adding some more extracurricular/interest stuff. That resume is literally just a wall of work experience text. That may be why nobody has given great feedback. Even I don't want to try to read all of that right now haha. Also would help if it wasn't redacted (although, I definitely wouldn't advise putting the non-redacted version on here, obviously). Could always use a resume review service like this if you really want to make sure it's in good shape

 

A helpful way to approach your resume would be to try to forget everything on it, then give yourself 15 seconds (like literally with a timer) to read it, and see what sentences stand out to you. Definitely think you should have some Interests or other items on it. Looks very bland right now.

 

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