Please tear my resume to shreds

Hi all! Preparing to apply for internships/jobs and hoping to get some resume advice. Applied to a few internships but have not heard back, so I figured its time to fix the resume. I abbreviated/edited the name of firms and clubs I'm involved in for anonymity reasons. Feel free to go all out and rip it to shreds. Practically begging yall to destroy my resume plsssss

edit- Ripped apart. Thank you

 
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Never fear, good old Crab Chiggins is here.

  • You need to include your address. I don't know whether you intentionally omitted this part for anonymity, or if you genuinely forgot it, but this needs to be included.

  • Use the WSO resume template. Your "Education" section looks very cluttered (e.g. you have an entire line about your GPA, Dean's List, etc). These should be separate bullet points.

  • Either write "Dean's List all semesters" if it's true, or don't include this at all. Listing out the specific semesters just makes it painfully obvious that you didn't make the Dean's List all semesters so you have to specificy each one. This is a BAD move.

  • You should switch minors. A management minor is absolutely useless.

  • You need to write in past-tense, as these jobs happened in the past.

  • Under your "Fitness Club" section, you wrote "responsible chapter finances." This should say "responsible FOR chapter finances."

  • Unless you're a girl, I would seriously consider removing "Ballet" from your interests. If you're a guy, people might think you're either a homosexual, or a gigantic wimp. Or both.

  • You need to have consistent fonts. Take your professional experience for example. You bolded "Asset Management Firm," but you also need to bold "City, State." The entire line must be consistent. Similarly, the "Asset Management Summer Analyst" is italicised... the time "Jun-Aug 2020" also needs to be italicized.

  • You don't need a line on top of EDUCATION.

  • Nobody knows what F45 training is. If it's weight training, write weight training. If it's cardio, write cardio.

 

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