Resume check - must submit in a few hours

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Rank: Senior Chimp | 17

After some suggestions ive changed my resume. I got rid of the camp job completely and expanded the analyst position. The 2nd link is the new version! Please let me know of any further changes as I must submit it in a few hours. Thanks!

Old
http://www.razume.com/documents/21519
New
http://www.razume.com/documents/21626
Rozen

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Aug 23, 2011

103 should become "over 100," or in "excess of 100" as sounds larger.

SAT or ACT scores

how many days did you do your financial aid thing for? you say 30 students a day, make that into 2000 or something similar

SPELL OUT THE MONTH NAMES

on the farm consultancy thing, write out "worked to complete over 15,000" and make another line stating that you worked with a team of 15 people

Aug 23, 2011

103 should become "over 100," or in "excess of 100" as sounds larger.

SAT or ACT scores

how many days did you do your financial aid thing for? you say 30 students a day, make that into 2000 or something similar

SPELL OUT THE MONTH NAMES

on the farm consultancy thing, write out "worked to complete over 15,000" and make another line stating that you worked with a team of 15 people

Aug 23, 2011
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