Resume: Equity Research in NYC from non-target. Critique this bad boy!

This is what I'm working with so don't tell me I need a higher GPA or a Goldman internship. Help me re-word or add to my experience, coursework etc. Again, I need to make this appealing for an ER position. Also, how do I most appropriately add CFA Level 1 Candidate on my resume? Love you all!

http://www.razume.com/documents/19905

NOTE: The above link depicts my edited resume after incorporating the advice received in this thread....

 
  • ouch, that GPA is gonna make it tough, get ready to network a lot
  • IMO you should take that cashier stuff out, it makes you seem like a kid
  • expand on the boeing stuff, F500 experience looks great, talk about projects you worked on
  • put 'CFA level 1 candidate' under additional information
 
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Allright here's one for fucking Karma. You need to tailor your Resume to an actual ER position. The best way is to grab a random posting that's online right now, and hack @ your resume to make it sound like you are doing ER work, even though you are clearly not.

I am going to hand you 2 on a silver goddamn platter. JPM and MS. I even picked out Aerospace for you, to see if you can leverage that. Yes these are for Associate but don't worry about that.

Go and retool your resume to fit these postings and then come back and post and we will re-critique.


IB - Equity Research - Aerospace/Defense Team- Associate - New York-110023302 Job Description We are looking to hire a Research Associate to join the Aerospace/Defense Team. The Associate's primary responsibilities would include industry analysis and company-specific coverage. This involves core research ranging from dissecting earnings releases and regulatory filings to assessing relevant news events, modeling financial statements and industry dynamics, writing First Call notes and sector pieces, and speaking to both internal and external clients and management teams about the stocks/sector.

Qualifications

Research is fast-paced, demanding and intellectually stimulating. We look for candidates who possess strong accounting, finance, quantitative and business writing/communication skills, as well as modeling, forecasting, and valuation experience. The candidate should have at least 2-4 years of experience (investment banking, research or another analytical and demanding role) and a demonstrated interest in Aerospace/Defense Team. An advanced level of proficiency in excel and a strong academic record are expected. Candidates are expected to be adaptable and have the ability to work well under pressure in a sometimes-intense environment, and should also be able to work independently to produce accurate, highly detailed materials while meeting tight deadlines. Intellectual curiosity, a strong work ethic and a team player mentality are desired attributes. JPMorgan Chase & Co. offers an exceptional benefits program and a highly competitive compensation package.


Morgan Stanley Investment Research is one of the financial industry's dominant thought leaders in equity and fixed-income investing and is a vital link between the Firm's varied business divisions. Our analysts, economists, and strategists have earned this reputation through timely, in-depth analysis of companies, industries, markets, and the world's economies. Our highly regarded equity analysts--who cover over 2,300 stocks globally and are organized by country, region, and global industry--develop key investment ideas and themes that are used by buy-side firms to structure portfolios as well as by the Morgan Stanley sales force in its interaction with investing clients; and provide valuable insights on market-moving events to the firm's traders and their clients. A career in Investment Research at Morgan Stanley demands a commitment to excellence and a passion for the markets as well as the highest level of integrity.
The Aerospace and Defense sector within Equity Research is looking for a strong Research Associate. The role involves building and maintaining models, as well as writing research notes and industry pieces. The team is looking for strong analytical candidates, with a passion for Equity Research. The role resides in our New York office.
Specific Requirements • ● Creation and maintenance of earnings, valuation and industry models leveraging skills in accounting, finance and economics ● Research and write reports with a company or sector specific focus ● Respond to requests for data, information and calls from internal and external clients ● Keep abreast of industry-related news flow ● Develop and maintain relationships with investor relations personnel and management of companies under coverage ● Regular interaction with equity sales force

Skills Required ● Outstanding analytical/financial skills ● Must have the aptitude and interest in financial modeling ● Proven accounting skills; CPA is a plus ● High energy, self-motivated, creative and organized ● Proven writing skills ● Strong focus on teamwork ● Attention to detail ● Ability to multitask and reprioritize a must

 

Durban,

Wow, you've really opened my eyes to a couple of different things:

  1. How poor my resume currently is and 2. How there is SO MUCH room to improve it.

I didn't realize that I have some of the skills and experience listed in the ER job descriptions that you posted. Allow me 24 hours or so to make some improvements. I would love to have you take a look at my edited resume.

Thanks!

 

it's largely irrelevant. everyone is a candidate for level 1 right? pass level 1....then list it. what did you do summer 2010? Why ER in NYC (why not something regional on the west coast)? I'd do an extensive search on this site, will be very helpful for adjusting your targets/goals...

 

Unfortunately, Summer 2010 was a bust. I was studying for the GMAT and applying to grad schools all summer. I was accepted into a Master's in Finance program, paid my deposit, and was all ready to go before family and financial issues closed the door on attending the program.

I have several alumni connections and family members that work in the financial sector in NYC.

 

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