Resume Feedback- Financial analyst

Hi everyone,

I would appreciate any feedback on my resume: format, language, anything. I would also appreciate any feedback on my career path.

http://www.razume.com/documents/24360

I enjoy doing financial analysis and financial modeling. I've been trying to get a position in the company like IBM for the financial analyst or equity research position in BB&T.

Overall, I tried to focus my resume on finance. I have four years experience in commercial banking, one year in equity research and portfolio management, and a summer internship in the corporate finance department of a hospital.

I have accumulated my project management experience from my last job as an operation specialist. Although I have learned a lot from my last job, it was not directly related to the finance area. I am struggling to sharpen up this experience to be beneficial to my targeted positions. Please provide me with some direction and feedback.

Thanks!