Hello Guys,
Thanks you for your input last time. I incorporated all your opinions and further tailored my resume.
I greatly appreciate you all for taking the time to look over my resume, there were a lot of things i missed and because of all of you I noticed my mistakes.
I hope you guys will look over my resume again.. Updated one!!
thanks in advance
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| +14 | Including Major Gpa and leaving off cumulative GPA off resume? | 6 | 1w | |
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| +14 | Pick Apart My IB Resume Like a Hostile Takeover - No Mercy | 7 | 3w | |
| +12 | Personal Summary on Resume | 2 | 3w | |
| +9 | Working Two Internships at the Same Time (Part-time remote + full-time in-person) | 1 | 4w | |
| +9 | Resume Question | 1 | 2w | |
| +9 | Resume Advice | 1 | 3d | |
| +9 | idk how to delete this | 1 | 3d | |
| +7 | "Interests/Hobbies" Resume Section Tier List | 5 | 1w |
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You were a "head" intern? WTF does that mean? And not once, but twice?
There's absolutely no results in your work experience (or anywhere else), except for your start up when you mention a sales figure offhand
What the heck is the Investment Banking Institute you have in your education? No way does that deserve more than a mention under skills at most, yet you give it seven (7!) lines
And what is "College Wall Street Career Program?" WTF, you give that another four lines? You list you were dean's list at some joke program, but couldn't make dean's list at a cuny?
Participated in Federal Reserve Challenge? They don't hand out medals for showing up dude.
You've got to streamline this, put in your results, and make your experience more realistic.
thanks. by "head" intern.. i was trying to let people know that i was in charge of a team of interns.
as of the wall street careers program.. thought being part of that progra, was worth mentioning in the honors section.. but i am glad you pointed out that it seemed like i dedicated 4 lines to it... there was only one line with rest of the other bullet points being other achievements..
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