Hi monkeys,
i'm planning to apply to IBD summer internships in London. My background might be weak, but i'm primarly looking for advice on grammar or words mistakes as english is not my mothertongue.
Any insight on the content itself will also be welcome!
http://www.razume.com/documents/16828
EDIT: new resume here : http://www.razume.com/documents/16850
thx a lot
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How is this written in English if your only 2 languages are french and german? Is the job you're applying for anglophonic or?
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