Hey guys I haven’t gotten a resume review in a while. I am a senior at a non-target state school. I received an offer from JPMorgan’s Treasury and Securities Services Analyst Program but possibly looking into IBD after a few years there and B-School. Let me know what your guys think.
Thanks in advance
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Looks tight. ;) I'd try to modify some features from a sample template though. They all look the same.
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What's your font size? If I were you, I would try to keep the font size to 12. I think you should also have a blank line between your experiences because they look quite jam-packed as of now.
Overall you've got some solid experience but you need to clean it up and open it up more:
You need spaces between your experiences - both professional and leadership - it's all way too squeezed together.
You have too many bullets and sub bullets - you can delete or combine at least a few of your points in your JPM experience and delete the first primary bullet, the title bullet (Selected Project Experience) and focus on cleaning up your projects and tasks - you don't need to discuss every single thing that you did, only what is more relevant and impressive - setting up calls, reading through and retaining things doesn't need to be on your resume.
Some of your bullets are in good shape, but others run on for 2-3 lines and don't go into how you accompished your task - only a bunch on what you did - ex. You Identified the impact... but how did you do it - was it anything complex - it could be seen as a lot of fluff - your saying that it allowed management to do things, but your not really telling me if you did anything or just show them a document or a number out of a document.
Remove the periods and take out the "/4.0"
were do to Foreign... should be "were DUE to Foreign..."
All bullets should start with a verb and in that first verb should be past tense
Your dates and cities should be aligned to the right
Move Concentration into its own bullet - maybe a double bullet with GPA
Good luck.
Move the location and dates to the end of the right side.
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